Bruises on the Moon (Awarded by Nicole)
I go to the place where we might find each-other. Warm corners draped in gold, I fold, those bruises on the moon within. I see you still, tall upon my small, the dripping ache behind these stolen...
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Hello (((Sammie))) Oh this just tears at the heart, feeling the pain in the relationship long gone, and long remembered, still yearned after, still not closed. Such stunning lines drawing and tugging...
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hello Sammie! I did read and comment on this another place...but I love the romance in this, and bruised moon is brilliance. Your use of internal rhyme is so unobtrusive that it makes the poem pour...
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good morning Max & Jesse why thankies kindly both on your warm replies to my moment of sadness ( i nearly said madness lol) try as I might tuck things in tighter, sometimes those little echoes,...
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this is just an entrancing thought, pulled me in as i know this bruised moon well... you painted it perfectly, will join Max with a lump in my throat...XO
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I fold, those bruises on the moon within. ~ ohhh Sammie....this one curled up inside my heart, and wants to stay for a while absolutely beautiful melancholy....your poetic voice is magical, and I am...
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(sorry if this is a double post. i'm apparently internet-challenged tonight. :-) ) I like the use of the moon in this piece. to me, addresses the sometimes ineffectual nature of attraction. great...
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This is a brilliant title Sammie How well you tell of a love now gone yet memories still keeping it alive Lovely warm hugs for you.
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Sammie, this is award worthy ache and beauty! I was going to quote the last stanza, then I had to grab the next line up...and so on ....and so on. So I'm just going to leave it like this.. *Standing...
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Sammie......this is beautifully heart wrenching!
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Sammie This beautiful poem falls so softly here tonight. I love the delicate phrases, and I agree that it does tug on the heartstrings. Stunning poem.
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Oh my.... Sammie, you breathe poetry in every word you pen. Such a beautiful spill here; your heart is gorgeous! ~Steve
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~Sammie~ This one tugs on my heart~strings as I read dear friend ~Such a tender soul ~share ..Thank goodness that bruises heal in time...
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Thanks so much HW, wow's are a great thing! Appreciate your reading and that lovely comment Sasha, and your words in such giving of replies is magical too Grateful! Mick, thanks so much for your...
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Sammie...this piece caught me off guard its impact still resonating in my head and heart. Each line a masterpiece within itself; my fav lines; I'm not ashamed to cry for things I cannot own or seek...
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~ such a pleasure to read this one again, dear Sammie this is poetry the heart cannot help but feel...and that is always a blessing Congratulations, hon...so very deserving Sash xx ...Read More
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